Today at fitness-a-thon we have done lots of star jumps, it was great.
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Thursday 9 November 2017
Monday 6 November 2017
Wednesday 6 September 2017
My Speech
WALT: Write a speech
Remember:
Introduction
- Do NOT start with “Hi I’m Jo and I’m going to talk to you about ...”
- State your key focus/point of view
- Have a great hook! Get your audience’s attention!
- Interesting fact - Did you know..?
- 3 powerful adjectives
- Statement - turn our into question into a statement sentence.
- Rhetorical question
Several Paragraphs
- One big idea per paragraph with evidence/information to support that big idea
- Use interesting connectives - see our modelling book for ideas
Concluding Statement
- Re-state key focus/point of view and leave your audience with something to think about
Title Soccer
Introduction
Soccer is the one of the most famous game in sports world, I been hearing about soccer since i’ve been toddler. Soccer is the game where anyone is welcome to play and watched by little kids and elders. Its also a very favourite sports for teenagers.
Big Idea 1
Soccer is over 3000 years old. It is made up of two teams with 11 players in each team. Soccer is played by 250 million players in over 200 countries, making it the world's most popular sport.
Big Idea 2
Do you know how much money they give you in soccer. The pro players get over 1 million dollars, medium players got $500, 000 and a beginner get $80,000 every year.
Big Idea 3
What is the best soccer player? At the moment, these players are rated as the top 5. Lionel Messi, Cristiano Ronaldo, Luis Suarez, Neymar and Sergio Aguero. And the best out of all I think is Messi and Cristiano.
Concluding Statement
Today I have told you why I like to watch and play soccer. You should have a game with your friends sometime.
Monday 24 July 2017
Tuesday 4 July 2017
Friday 30 June 2017
Friday 23 June 2017
Gorillas
WALT; write a non chronological report
Remember to use:
- an opening paragraph explain what your report is about.
- headings and subheadings for the main body.
- an closing paragraph, recapping on what you have written.
- Pictures, maps etc with captions to explain what they are.
Remember to use faction not opinions.
The Mighty Gorilla
Gorillas live in Africa.
What do Gorillas look like?
The gorilla is huge, with broad chest and shoulders. The arms are longer than the stubby legs. The fully adult male mountain gorilla is twice as large then the female. Gorillas have large head, they are really hairy and they have super large teeth.
What do they eat?
Gorillas eat lots of vegetables, bamboo and leaves. Gorillas need lots of food . Gorillas are vegetarian and only eat plants .The plants they eat are leaves bamboo and wild celery.
What do Gorillas look like?
They have a thick trunk ,a large head and shiny black hair and big muscles. They grow up to 6 feet tall. Gorillas can live up 50 years. They use their hands to play explore and investigate.
Where do gorillas live?
They live in dense forests and woodlands in Africa and they live in places
that are 10,000 ft in the mountains. Up in the mountains it is cloudy , misty and cold.
Gorillas live up in the high mountains and are very intelligent. Gorillas are very smart and they use tools to find food .I like that the Gorilla is such a smart animal not like other animals.
Monday 19 June 2017
Friday 2 June 2017
Tuesday 2 May 2017
Thursday 30 March 2017
Friday 24 March 2017
Monday 27 February 2017
Story Web - Beauty and the Beast
We have been learning to create a Story Web. We selected a story from StoryNory to share our learning.
Title Beauty and The Beast
Author : Bertie
Setting: In a castle
Characters Belle, Beast, Five daughters, Father - The merchant
Beginning
Many years ago, a merchant had six daughters. The first five were born when business was good, and he spoiled them rotten.
Middle
Beast, where are you?” she called as she hurried through the echoing halls in search of him. She recalled his words. She rubbed the ring and in an instant she was transported back to the palace.
End
He made no reply. She kissed the mottled back of his head, and as she did so, he gradually transformed into a handsome man, a prince,
Evaluation
This story is very interesting, I recommend it as a 4 star story. ****
Thursday 9 February 2017
Wednesday 8 February 2017
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