Title Beauty and The Beast
Author : Bertie
Setting: In a castle
Characters Belle, Beast, Five daughters, Father - The merchant
Beginning
Many years ago, a merchant had six daughters. The first five were born when business was good, and he spoiled them rotten.
Middle
Beast, where are you?” she called as she hurried through the echoing halls in search of him. She recalled his words. She rubbed the ring and in an instant she was transported back to the palace.
End
He made no reply. She kissed the mottled back of his head, and as she did so, he gradually transformed into a handsome man, a prince,
Evaluation
This story is very interesting, I recommend it as a 4 star story. ****
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